Thanks! I went through and fixed a few more typos, too.
I'm really glad you liked it — it's a pretty far way off the beaten path for me, but I really wanted to write something for Shibusa (I thought it was a harder but also more interesting topic than Rapture of the Deep). And while Shibusa is a Japanese term, I thought that I'd borrow upon my parents' mythologies to spin a tale of the once upon a far east.
At one point, I think a dragon was going to appear, but I think it would've needed another thousand words or so.
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Date: 2015-02-13 02:17 am (UTC)I'm really glad you liked it — it's a pretty far way off the beaten path for me, but I really wanted to write something for Shibusa (I thought it was a harder but also more interesting topic than Rapture of the Deep). And while Shibusa is a Japanese term, I thought that I'd borrow upon my parents' mythologies to spin a tale of the once upon a far east.
At one point, I think a dragon was going to appear, but I think it would've needed another thousand words or so.