What's Missing?

[talonkarrde]

This is an unfinished story, about a man who will never read these words.

It is a man who didn't have a home, a car, a job, or any one of the comforts that we enjoy and discard carelessly on a day to day basis, a man who walked and slept with the clothes on his back and a guitar in his hands. 

His name was John — or at least, that's what he claimed it was — and he had been busking — or panhandling, or flat out begging — for a few years now. He was dirty, and unkempt, and looked just like you'd expect him to look, just as you'd expect someone who had been out on the streets for months and not have easy access to a shower to look. His clothes were tattered, though at least they covered everything they should, and his beard was disgusting and matted and tangled.

And, of course, the smell, the same smell that hangs around your trash can and you can never get rid of, the same smell that you learn to associate with spoiled milk and rancid meat and decay. That was his smell.

It wasn't much of a first impression.

But then he'd open his mouth and sing a tune, and you'd forget about all of that, because he was good. Not that good, mind you, not good enough to make a living from it and sit in a fancy nightclub, crooning out the blues or covers of the hits, but good enough that you noticed, good enough that you'd take out the one earphone you had in to listen to him instead.

I must have walked past him ten, fifteen times in the station over the course of a few months without making eye contact, or smiling, or doing anything that acknowledged his existence. It's generally better that way, because then you don't have to say no to them directly when they ask you for change — though he never did, even when he was taking a break between songs and could've asked those who were just listening to spare some money.

But this night in particular, he was singing Hotel California, and doing a good job, too. I had nowhere to be in a hurry, so I stopped, leaned up against a wall, and simply stared at nothing in particular while he sang and strummed along. He was pretty good at the guitar, too, and I hummed along in my head, listening as the notes of the closing refrain drifted towards the ceiling.

He was smiling, and I felt obligated, after that, to give him something for his time. After all, he had just performed, and it felt like he was due something, so I stepped forward to give him a five. Not that much to me, but something that made that song worthwhile for him — might even mean his meal tonight, I figured, or at least a beer.

He thanked me and then asked me if I had anywhere to be. I honestly didn't, and I said so, and he asked if I'd mind listening to one of his original songs. Shrugging — and mentally preparing myself for the class of people who are better at copying than they are at creating — I said it'd be fine, and he launched into it.

This isn't a fairy tale: the song wasn't the most glorious thing I had ever heard, nor was it a sad, thoughtful reflection on the state of the world, or a rant about being left behind by society.  It was simply a small ditty about who he was, with a few good turns of phrase about his hometown (Portland) and a few jokes about current events in there. It couldn't have won a Grammy, even in a world where Taylor Swift does, but at the same time, it wasn't bad, and I enjoyed it.

That's where it started, I guess; I ended up asking him how he had gotten to San Francisco, and the entire story came out. He had lived in Portland for most of his life, and then had gone to college on his parents' money, going to a Univeristy of California school. He had stayed with it for four years, despite not being too interested in what he was doing, and ended up graduating, albeit with a somewhat low GPA.

His major? Computer science.

Yup.

I'm pretty sure he saw the surprise in my eyes when he said it. He half-smiled, and shrugged, and said that coding was something that he was good at, just... not quite good enough, he finished, with the pause in the middle. He had held a few temp jobs, but they all ended up falling through, and finally decided to strike out instead of leeching off his parents, and after a few more temp positions, ended up where he was, wandering the city and playing for the money to get his next meal.

And for the life of me, all I could think about is how, if things had been slightly different, I could be in his spot — albeit, I suppose, with less talent in the vocal performance department. And the guitar-playing department. And probably the 'actually being able to live off the streets' skills department. In fact, I don't think I could make it half as well as he was.

I asked him — as I'm sure anyone who had ever heard his story before asked — whether he was still looking for jobs now, but he smiled that self-deprecating smile again and indicated his current state. "Not exactly what they look for," he said, and I could only agree. 

"Still..." I tried, and he pre-empted me, and assured me that he was still trying. In fact, he said, he was heading back to Portland soon, to follow up on a few leads his high school friends had there. He said that I had caught him at the perfect time, since he was due to leave next week, and that if he didn't show up there again, it meant that he had found a place to work. I gave him everything I had that night — only about $25 — and wished him the best — if he did come back, I said, I'd buy him a meal, at the least, while he caught me up on his travels.

#

It's been a month since then, and I haven't seen him back yet. I hope I don't, but if I do, I'll absolutely honor my word. Beyond that — well, this isn't a morality tale, and there are no easily taught lessons, I don't think. All I know is that I still think about how dumb luck can be the difference between a career and (at least) a few years on the streets. What if the job market was better? What if he tried a bit harder? What if his parents knew different people?

We always do the best we can with the cards that we're dealt, I suppose, and can only hope the cards aren't too bad.

Comments

[comedychick.livejournal.com]

I wish I had something profound to say in response, but my words seem to be somewhat lacking right now. In any case, I enjoyed this.

[talon.livejournal.com]

Thank you (and have a great trip)!

[comedychick.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[myrna-bird.livejournal.com]

I am so glad you are back. Tis is such a human story. Your writing has a certain something that gives me shivers in a good way.

[talon.livejournal.com]

Aww, thank you so much. It's a departure from the usual fiction that I think I am better at, but this just felt like the right story to tell.

[crimsonplum.livejournal.com]

You're not nearly as rusty as you think, my dear. <3

Also? "It couldn't have won a Grammy, even in a world where Taylor Swift does"? An actual LOL. Well said.

[talon.livejournal.com]

-snickers- I think you may be biased, but thank you anyway :)

[heartlines.livejournal.com]

I really liked this!

[talon.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[basric.livejournal.com]

A lovely story, beautifully told.

[talon.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

[oxymoron67.livejournal.com]

I liked this: random connections between people.

Also, this was told well without much sentimentality. It was well-written.

[talon.livejournal.com]

Thank you; I didn't want to turn it into something that was too mushy/feel good, because I think that would've devalued the point of it.

[gratefuladdict.livejournal.com]

You're a good egg.

[talon.livejournal.com]

Why did I hear the 'charlie brown' after that?

[gratefuladdict.livejournal.com]

If you have voices in your head, you might want to keep that under wraps.

[medleymisty.livejournal.com]

Excellent entry. I hope that he did find a job and that he's doing okay now.

[talon.livejournal.com]

-nods- thank you! I hope so too, but if not, I have at least a hot meal to offer.

[karmasoup.livejournal.com]

You have always had this ability to stir emotion in your readers without actually expressing much of it yourself. This piece is a classic example; I can feel it. Good to have you here again... have missed your quiet way of creating a touching vision.

[talon.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you. I don't always try and write...clinically, for lack of a better word, but I think sometimes it works to do so.

[whipchick.livejournal.com]

It's so true - it's not "hard work" and "trying" that prevent us from that situation - a lot of times it's a stroke of bad luck, or a few strokes in a row. This is a lovely, thoughtful portrait.

[talon.livejournal.com]

-nods- and I think that's the hardest thing, because sometimes we can look say, 'oh, you should try harder', but other times, all there is to say is, what, 'i'm sorry the system failed you?' :(

[kathrynrose.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this.

[talon.livejournal.com]

I'm glad to hear it :)

[michikatinski.livejournal.com]

You never know--he might read them.

It struck me that the man you're talking about may be someone I've seen and listened to, as well.

May I ask which station?

[talon.livejournal.com]

Powell! Where I used to get off for work every day. This was when they were doing construction and had half of the long hallway that opens up to the Northeast closed.

[michikatinski.livejournal.com]

Yes, I remember the construction! I haven't been at that station enough to remember that man, though.

Thanks again for sharing this.

[ravenshrinkery.livejournal.com]

It's great to see you back, I loved writing with you when we did last season, and reading you again reminded me of why. That said, let's hook up on Steam sometime. :)

[talon.livejournal.com]

Thank you, and likewise, and oh man, been so busy lately I have a backlog of like six games I've bought on steam that I haven't even touched :(

[cheshire23.livejournal.com]

I love that this isn't a morality tale and that it's as real and ambiguous as, well, life. Good to see you back. :)

[talon.livejournal.com]

Thanks :) I think morality tales sometimes gloss over the complex nature of life and actually do their subjects a disservice, so I tried to veer away from that.

[noodledays.livejournal.com]

what a lovely, heartfelt piece this was.

[talon.livejournal.com]

Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!