-grin- I like the premise. You even managed to convince me you wanted to be gentlemanly about the details of the sex.

I think that, in part, makes the narrator carry a certain degree of naivety and so the ending is foreshadowed, the reader shouldn't really be surprised, but it hits, and it's humorous to boot.

The only worry I have is that this is a very similar set up to an episode of S2's Californication. Then again, all the things we're doing here, all a variation on a theme, right? =D