Could you see yourself as this person? Would you, under the right circumstances, go down all of these roads? Admittedly, you're on your way to completing college education, and not all of your girls have been traditional enough that they're most associated with their food. But when overcome with rage, betrayal, passion, could you slaughter people?
I don't understand why a neighbor would take the car. There are many explanations (vanity, injury, pride, moving a large quantity of things, laziness), but unless you go into them, it would make more sense to leave a bottle of champagne or roses or something sentimental/romantic outside of the house to build up to the concrete proof of betrayal. Neighbors typically walk to other neighbor's houses.
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Date: 2008-10-23 10:52 am (UTC)I don't understand why a neighbor would take the car. There are many explanations (vanity, injury, pride, moving a large quantity of things, laziness), but unless you go into them, it would make more sense to leave a bottle of champagne or roses or something sentimental/romantic outside of the house to build up to the concrete proof of betrayal. Neighbors typically walk to other neighbor's houses.
It's good.