Thanks! I went through and fixed a few more typos, too.

I'm really glad you liked it — it's a pretty far way off the beaten path for me, but I really wanted to write something for Shibusa (I thought it was a harder but also more interesting topic than Rapture of the Deep). And while Shibusa is a Japanese term, I thought that I'd borrow upon my parents' mythologies to spin a tale of the once upon a far east.

At one point, I think a dragon was going to appear, but I think it would've needed another thousand words or so.