http://crisp-sobriety.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] crisp-sobriety.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] talonkarrde 2015-01-30 04:58 pm (UTC)

This is really good.

At the writing level I especially admired the breakdown of the one, long, second, that really stuck with me.
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