http://crisp-sobriety.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] crisp-sobriety.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] talonkarrde 2014-11-13 03:32 pm (UTC)

Aw, this is quite nice. It feels very different from your other work that I've read, so it shows that you have range.

Ah, I loved magic as a kid. I went to big shows with huge audiences like this one, read books, even took a class once (with a bunch of other 8-year-olds), but I was never any good. Your narrator is lucky to have natural talent!

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