Date: 2014-07-29 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
Yay! I really like this -- you did a great job of integrating the noir elements with the plot. :) And I like the way you've woven the necklace through the story, always causing trouble, never quite enough that it isn't worth it.
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