Hmm. Might be worth putting it aside for a day or so and coming back fresh, to see if anything jumps out at you.
Are you writing it for your journal, or for something else? One way to choose who your audience is might be to look at who is likely to be reading it. :)
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Date: 2012-04-11 08:05 am (UTC)Are you writing it for your journal, or for something else? One way to choose who your audience is might be to look at who is likely to be reading it. :)